POCKETS. lineart.

well i re-uploaded this one.... ^ ^ added the last 2 panels!! ^ ^ !!! ^ ^
let me know what u think of this one ^ ^
here are the colored versions
panel 1-->
panle 4-->
TRANSLATION for those who don't know japanese ^ ^ (left to right)
panel1 :- i'm home, welcome back
panel2:- i love you, always/forever
panel3:- its cold!, i know right?
panel4:- should we head back?, yes!